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Snowflakes falling everyday
I reach out and feel them melt away
Slowing coming down on me
I shriek with joy as they fall
Forever I have dreamed of snow
For my first Christmas had none that I know
All I've ever known before
Were bedtime stories and fairy tales
This is a dream come true
I spin around
The falling snow
Makes no sound
I stick out my tongue
To have snowflakes fall
And melt away in my mouth
I pick up a snowball
And throw it
But then
It begins to fade
The snowflakes, and snowballs
Drift away
Tears fall down my face
As I look around
And it disappears
I finally realize
It's just another dream
I wake up
On Christmas day
Disappointed again
Another years gone by
And no snowflakes fall
I think I may die
- Title: Snowflakes Falling
- Artist: rayne482
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- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: snowflakes falling
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SuperMarioStar - 08/06/2009
- nice but check grammar and spelling and remember to make a point in what u say
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- SuperMarioStar - 08/06/2009
- nice but check grammar and spelling
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- ShadowSnakeUser - 07/11/2009
-
ok
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- tancong - 06/10/2009
- that's really good!!!
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- Bye-Bye-Crow - 05/23/2009
- Nice 5/5
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- butterfly_angelika - 02/06/2009
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cool the best
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- jasper joker - 12/18/2008
- its pretty good, but there are bits of weird things here and there, whats with the last line?
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