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I stare into the cracked mirror known as "chirstmas spirit." but when I try to see the image clearly, the mirror smashes to pieces, all the happiness and joy pouring out onto the cold, industrial ground named reality. I then try to speak to the unseen man known as generosity, asking for a loaf of bread, but instead he hands me a foreclosure notice and an uncaring tone. But as all of reality seems to crash down on me, a young woman stops the avalanche with just a passing glance and a smile, and then she turns to me... holding out a loaf of bread and an open heart.
The moral of the story, if you care enough to give, you will recieve what you truely desire.
Merry christmas ^_^
- by Chaotic--Luminosity |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: Realitys mirror
- Artist: Chaotic--Luminosity
- Description: well I came up with this at the last minute, please don't hate me for suckish writing, I'm not exactly the best writer out there...so yeah, vote fairly and enjoy if you please.
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: sadness love hate sadness pain
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Comments (5 Comments)
- TristansRun - 01/14/2011
- Excellent work. You may not be totally aware of WHY, but you've used many elements quite well, and I love the tone. Please elaborate from this, I believe you could go MUCH further, and I mean that well smile .
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- kalie510 - 01/31/2010
- this is good!
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- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- INCREDIBLE!!! what the heck are you talking about, "suckish writing"?!?!?! omg man, you got talent!
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- devanisonfire - 03/31/2009
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wow this is cool
to bad i lost my poetry ways a long time ago - Report As Spam
- inu-kun_neko-chan - 01/10/2009
- aaaaawww. i like it. ^^
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