- I am poor. My home is not that great. But I should be thankful for being able to actually have furniture in my house. People that think they are poor just because they do not have A LOT of furniture: You are lucky just to have it. smile
- by GuitarRocker98 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: The home story
- Artist: GuitarRocker98
- Description: Don't complain
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: home story
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- Yanick Chiasson - 09/09/2010
- GOOD BYE FRIEND
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- Zynd the Lucky - 06/29/2009
- my only qualm is that it's not really a poem. no ryme, no distinct verses, and no main story. you can say "the snow the snow the snow" as much as you like, but that doesn't make that a poem! other than that, i agree with fasionpixiez17.
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- FashionPixiez17 - 12/30/2008
- That is so true. Your poem speaks the truth! 10 out 10!
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