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The Icy Fingers of November,
So gently flowing in the wind.
So gracefully they brace our spirits.
Such magic winter winds doth bring.
Just look above!
Can you not see the marvel?
Can you not feel the presence of the wind?
Can you not trust yourself? Embrace the thunder!
Embrace the thunder, rain, the wind, and you'll be free!
You will be free, my friend, of all your worries!
Of all your daily tasks and chores you will be free!
You will become a messenger of messages beyond us.
Accept, for you belong with me.
Though separated now,
Will will unite once more!
The season calls,
And we must heed the call!
The call to arms!
The call to hearts!
The call to reunite at once!
And so, come meet me now
Beneath this tree we planted,
Beneath this tree, where all the worlds must end.
Beneath this tree, where all the ails are nothing,
Beneath this tree, where no man's foot shall thread.
Beneath this tree, where no betrayal happens,
Beneath this tree, where mistletoe would hang.
Beneath this tree, your Icy Fingers touched me,
Beneath this tree, where I forever lay.
- Title: The Icy Fingers of November
- Artist: userdan
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Description:
I don't usually write about seasons , but no one can say I didn't give it a shot. Note though, that my meter can be confusing at first - each stanza is adjusted to itself - i.e. try and find the inner meter inside each stanza if you can't see the rhyme. I promise you it's there.
I better make my defense now:
"Celebration" is a synonym for "Praising", not just fancy-happy-timing. I think I praised winter in there, at least to an extent it wouldn't feel ok with. So no stupid comments about that. - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: fingers november
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- iSatellizer - 09/13/2009
- sobicoooi
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- kobnas - 05/31/2009
- good
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- userdan - 01/24/2009
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@crazymonkey:It was november.XD
Besides, November, for me, symbolises the whole season. I believe the first 'scent' of winter, when referring to it, has more meaning that it's epithet or it's decline. - Report As Spam
- Benny621 - 12/30/2008
- its not november!
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- I Am Ritsuka San - 12/26/2008
- You did very well. =]
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- leafyjr - 12/13/2008
- uhm, it's....um......i'm speechless, zebzebzebzebzeb
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