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the great sound of the ocean tide
i never knew i'd miss it.
on the waves the surfers ride
untill the current tips it.
how i miss the ocean brease
just flowing through my hair,
and to hear the wistle of the trees
the earth's soft whispers through the air.
the sand so soft to touch
like powder in my hand.
i never realy liked it much
untill i left that beautiful land.
- by misamisa800 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: ocean
- Artist: misamisa800
- Description: i lived in florida untill we moved to west virginia this year and now instead of sand...... there is snow. so i wrote this 'cause i miss it.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: ocean
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xX_Kozakura_Xx - 02/27/2009
- best I've read yet 4/5 cuz i cant do 4.8
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- Shimitana - 12/29/2008
- I liked it. Twas nice, but you have several misspelled words ^^;
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