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The night before chrismas
is the night of cheer
yet no one crepped
in this house
all asleep
the morning will come
but not till tommorrow
yet this is the day of cheer
- by SwimSuitAdditionGirl |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: the night before christmas
- Artist: SwimSuitAdditionGirl
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- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: night before christmas
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Comments (6 Comments)
- BarlowGirl3 - 08/24/2010
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Well, I like your poem. smile Most of the commenters before me are obviously good at being rude about disliking something, but i don't believe they really have to a right to say "u did a really bad job puting it together."
Poems don't have to have a definite syllable count in each line, or a rhyme scheme, so if they have some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, they can say so (in a polite way). - Report As Spam
- DLneostarG - 12/26/2009
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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=101898257#title
can u check this one, type this to the URL bar and Vote: - Report As Spam
- bjhyi - 08/31/2009
- it it sheet and u did a really bad job puting it together.
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- mommys cute lovely girl - 05/20/2009
- You did good but thats not the way do better next time sad biggrin
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- Coldhearted-x - 02/24/2009
- its good but try harder
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- frealymelol - 12/24/2008
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its good
but it really doesnt go together
sad - Report As Spam
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