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YE OL' ORPGHANAGE:
Dear Mista Santah,
Is a child of small value be allowed to ask for such small things?
My wish is not of this question,
Mista Ol' Saint Nick.
My wish is for this foster and homes for the upcoming pick,
youngens of two and three then their are children just as me.
We question such magic for we have none,
when summer is to come the teachers say we have one
Plants of marygold and bells on stems; a green thumb they say!
This is the coldest year we saught,
more children that the last and before that.
Other than me, for food they faught!
Exchange my present to save my loved ones.
Father and mother I had but once,
I prayed that time too
but god didn't hear even though he knew.
Lillith and tom, billy then rin!
All stood but by my side at worsts end,
for them will you defend?
Thank you Mistah Ol' Saint Nick,
I leave you with my most cherished gift
Some cookies my mother had left,
taste her sweet, bitter descent.
- by Oblivious Sharada |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Mistah Ol' Saint Nick
- Artist: Oblivious Sharada
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Description:
A letter written to santa from englands largest orphanage.
One single child notices the homes great distress and hopes for the best.
He thought god had betrayed him with his dieing parents so santa was left.
Almost a prayer to save all of his closest friends for the coldest winter. ENJOY! - Date: 12/12/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- BarlowGirl3 - 12/06/2010
- Nice job, it's sweet like they say, but... you couldn't even capitalize God? I mean, you took care to capitalize Mistah Ol' Saint Nick, but if you're talking about God (the only one), He deserves respect. Still, 5/5 i guess (cuz it WAS sweet =))
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- liljaybs96 - 07/18/2009
- dats so sweet. i liked it
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- puddingmcspaz1627 - 05/12/2009
- sweet! smile
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- BeaniesFTW - 12/28/2008
- Nice job, but you could've added rhyme. I'll give you a 5/5 anyway, though.
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- Hawkpelt2 - 12/22/2008
- Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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- Oblivious Sharada - 12/14/2008
- Thank you~
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- Plum Cyanide - 12/12/2008
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Loooovvveee it! 4laugh
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