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Cold like The chilled wind in christmas morning.
warm like the toasty fire .
Fun like the thought of ice skating.
happiness, Like a world with peace.
Soft, like your favorite blanket
and i, alone Reading a favorite book
- Title: christmas morning
- Artist: ella eva
- Description: winter wonderland
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: winter wonderland
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Comments (4 Comments)
- a ghetto kitty - 08/23/2010
- I love reading also. Sounds really good, but it would be better if you described what you felt more clearly.
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- pichu566 - 06/29/2009
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It was okay...
Not my favourite poem... - Report As Spam
- Polarm21 - 03/02/2009
- If you make it have more sense words(hear touch see smell and taste) it would really sound and feel to the reader that it is a Christmas morning. This is pretty good!
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- Amunankhage - 01/17/2009
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Your poem describes christmas morning means to you huh?
It's really pretty good, but work on lyrics...
Don't leave too much for readers to fill in on their own. 4/5
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