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Bells jingling
The biting air
People at the house are mingling
As the night goes on
The stars are shining
From the kids come a dare
For the presents there is a pining
And a hope that Santa is not the result of a con
When everyone sleeps, a loud thump is heard
Russling from the decked tree
When the white and red was seen, they knew it wasn't absurd
Beard essense of cloud, laughing a HoHoHo
Red ribbons, blue bows, bringing huge delight
Every kid whispering, "That one's for me!"
Next morning, there was quite a fight
For the pickle hidden, all other kids were a foe
The morning sky was white with snow
Every handful crushed diamonds, throwing with all might
The pines were green, the blazing fire red
Never the less, Santa's presents did not go to their head
- Title: 16 Hours
- Artist: Windona
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Description:
This is commentary. It may ruin the poem. Read at own risk.
It is suppose to be what happened Christmas night and the next morning. For those wondering about the last line, it can mean both presents (gifts) or presence (don't know exact definition).
Anyway, please enjoy this holiday poem, and find any meaning you can in it! A poem is a living thing once written anyway, so it might mutate from my meaning. - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: santa pine trees colors winter
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Black_Shinn_Hisakawa - 07/15/2009
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Why it is entitled 16 Hours?
I don't get it, but nice.
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- hotcuppa - 04/25/2009
- nice
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