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Asleep in her bed she sees the image that plays in her dreams.
She awakes and tiptoes to the tree, there she sees a tiny present, marked to ''Lilly, from me.'' She runs as fast as a three year olds feet will go, to mommy and daddy. Peeking around the door she takes a deep breath and yells ''up, up he came he came.'' As they arise she turns and starts to run back, as she arrives she waits jumping up and down. Mommy and daddy come in, she twists her tiny hands in theirs, blonde curls flowing, she looks up to see them smiling as she losens her grip.With a tiny thump she sits down,holds her present in her little hands, and begins thelong awaited task of unwrapping, carfully, so not break her gift she removes the last piece, and lifts, when open she screams for here sits the baby doll, she saw in her dreams.
"(this is my work and i do want your comments on what you think,and no it's not suppose to rhyme all the way through, thank you for your time, and i hope you enjoy it!!)"
- Title: Dream
- Artist: gloomycow
- Description: A little girls dream.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: dream
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Comments (5 Comments)
- anne hataway - 12/04/2009
- ok thanks for the rhyme................
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- Le Pumpkin - 11/04/2009
- awww.how cute! love it! 5!
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- T ZERO sqwad_cupcake - 04/03/2009
- like they say poems don't have to rhyme.
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- Sam the Morningstar - 01/10/2009
- I actually like that it doesn't rhymn. It gives it more freedom.
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- Spell Master Soubi - 12/19/2008
- very cute X3 i entered this to, and worte a christmas poem as we were supposed to. yet this is actually one of the ones out of hundreds ive seen that are actually about christmas -_- 5 biggrin
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