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Hanging ornaments on the tree
Branches bend and bow to me
Beautiful and as big so far as I can see
But, nothing can compare
To the presents beneath at which we longingly stare
They can only be opened on Christmas morn...so unfair.
Maybe to sneak a peek
At the present which plays with me hide n' seek
A TREACHEROUS game at which it has won this week
I must keep my mind at ease
This next week will be a breeze
I must make sure to avoid the presents I long to seize
On Christmas night, I can open one
But, my gift was not quite so fun...
I opened socks...the parents won.
- by Galindafied1 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/11/2008 |
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- Title: Presents Under the Tree
- Artist: Galindafied1
- Description: A Christmas poem about how badly I want to open presents and how unlucky it is when you're allowed to open one on Christmas eve and it sucks.
- Date: 12/11/2008
- Tags: presents tree under socks
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Comments (7 Comments)
- M 0 T 0 Mac - 03/05/2010
- nice :p
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- ll SuperMuffinz ll - 06/01/2009
- Hmmm...not bad, but i think it needs a little work thats all.
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- Enya Erisu - 04/29/2009
- lol that sucks, i hope u get a nice gift next christmas <3
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- hiii its vic - 04/19/2009
- aw thats so cute
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- Coldhearted-x - 02/24/2009
- yo that rocks really ......and u hav skill thats wat i knw
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- sweetlitlangel - 01/31/2009
- lol very sad but funny poem
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- CookieJJK - 01/26/2009
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Awwwing x3
I Got Nothing
For Christmas
Except For Joy :L - Report As Spam