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- by FrostyBitts |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: The storm cloud
- Artist: FrostyBitts
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Description:
I sat behind th window
waiting for the storm
and then i saw the storm cloud
it was big and black and very proud
rolling from the sea
these big black cloud went as far as the eye could see
as the cloud came closer
you could begin to dwell
that this storm would be a big one
i just cant wait to tell,
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: storm cloud
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SWAGG 2 HIGH - 04/17/2011
- i like it
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- Captain zeldalover123 - 07/19/2009
- at first i thought it wasnt anything i looked at the deciption and i read i well im going to give u a 55 since you tried smile
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- -restton- - 07/08/2009
- nice..
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- dawnkills321 - 05/21/2009
- its ok but it needs work i write my own poetry and it gets put into books not to brag but ull get there u got talent ill say that but u need to practice
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- gmoney1991 - 02/28/2009
- GREAT JOB
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- Ayumi_Cherry - 12/16/2008
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i like it =]
please rate mine too, its called life, lost, 2hearts1destiny.
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- Prissence - 12/13/2008
- very nice
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