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i see you snow on the floor not to happy that it is on the floor of my death bed? i loved to run in the snow. I loved to eat the snow. I love to see the snow. i love to feel the snow i love to see the snow! in my eyes i see nothing am dead but i know when it is time to feel feel the snow on me bed.
the guy i liked all ways said when you die i will be bye you but he is not alive he is dead he dead on x-mas last year am not lying love what you can before it is all gone see what you can and next time it snows have fun.
if i could say smothing to him i would say i love you and i would love to feel the snow.
- by the mcr gir |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: snow may fall
- Artist: the mcr gir
- Description: its fun sad and happy
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: feelthesnow
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- Daughter of Elves - 03/30/2010
- A little effort in editing, please! Capitalization, punctuation, etc. will make your writing ten times more appealing. Even the best poem gets low marks if poorly edited.
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- HeartleszX - 05/25/2009
- i like this ^_^
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