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Candycane
I see the red and white perfect stripe on the delicious candycane.
I taste the minty fresh peppermint in my mouth.
I could see all the children laughing and smiling while eating the spirited cane.
I hear people opening and making scrathy noises trying to eat the candycane.
I can smell that perfect minty aroma in the air,"oh, it smell so good."
Oh i can taste the sprited cane in my mouth and when i blow into the cold air i can smell and feel the minty breath and the cold.
- by donghaerts |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Candycane
- Artist: donghaerts
- Description: This is a poem about your sences colour, taste, see, hear, smell, and taste.
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: candycane redandwhite colourtasteseehearsmellfeel acrosticpoem peppermint
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Comments (7 Comments)
- skyril - 05/04/2010
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it's ok
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- pumawildcat11 - 02/03/2010
- I think the poem is lovley and it tells details about the smell,taste, hear, and see.and if you realize it also is talking about a holiday that is great because you care and share on that holiday.
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- Mukuro Katsuki - 12/27/2008
- awesome 5/5 one of Chantal's friend
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- pamcutey - 12/24/2008
- Awesome PoemXD
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- Kubo Uzumsuki - 12/23/2008
- pretty cool 5/5
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- xo_MysterieGal_ox - 12/23/2008
- Nice poem .. !!
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- woohyuns - 12/23/2008
- Nice Poem It's AWESOME!
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