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As i looked out of my foggy window
I saw some children who was pouting
About how snow doesn't come
Soon a speck of white fell from the sky
And more and more
The children looked up and saw snow puring down from the sky
The children shouted with glee as snow poured down
I ran outside and heard a murmur from the wind
"Don't stay in but go out and have a fun day with the first snow in your life."
- Title: The Wintry Day
- Artist: logitool
- Description: I made this of how i wanted to see snow and soon saw the first snow came down.I then heard my brother whisper to me about the same thing too.
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: wintry
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Wolf_grl_89 - 10/04/2010
- your grammar kind of needs work, but i get at what your saying.
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- Ivan62300 - 02/15/2010
- this is just SAD... 1/5
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- Melekinh - 12/11/2009
- okay, but your grammar needs work.
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- Jicario - 12/16/2008
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Soz Logitool, but it doesn't have a beat and the description could have been better, but u put a lot of effort in i can see but it could have been better...
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