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oh mistletoe mistletoe hung so high,
but its the guy underneath that catches my eye,
clueless to where he stands,
clueless to where i am,
it hurts to think about him,
this is looking very grim,
he looks so lonely,
i want to be his one and only,
his girlfriend walks by,
i feel like i want to die,
she kisses him and he holds her tight,
i hold in a cry with all my might,
he moves over to me with her by his side,
my stomach begins to churn from the inside,
he walks pass me as if i weren't there,
like he doesn't even care,
maybe its better this way,
so then why do i feel so betrayed
oh mistletoe mistletoe hung so high,
why do i even try.
- by XGuilty PleasureX |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: mistletoe
- Artist: XGuilty PleasureX
- Description: This is for my best friend i like but he doesn't have a gaia (he also doesn't know i like him i wish i could tell him) this is a true story
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: mistletoe love heartbreak
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Comments (7 Comments)
- We_Eat_Girl_Scouts - 02/28/2010
- Awww. I loved it but it made me feel sad for you. Don't worry, he's just to dumb to notice that he should be with you. You'll find a smart one that knows he's ment to be yours. 5/5
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- Seeker-of-Justice - 11/06/2009
- I would work on rythm and choice of words 4/5
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- cod5 champion - 06/16/2009
- holy crap somebody is good
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- scanning anti malware - 02/23/2009
- thats a really good poem, i like it so much because it actully makes sence and it rhyms. i love rhyming poems. nice work
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- iTofuu - 01/09/2009
- awww i hope you two become a couple one day :]
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- Empress Of Cheese - 12/31/2008
- Next time, you should watch your grammar and capitalization. You'll get higher ratings that way.
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- Serenitty11 - 12/25/2008
- Oww I like ^_^
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