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On a winter snowy day,
The streets are paved with snow and ice.
Never able to go outside and play.
But warm inside with the warmth and care,
From Mom and Dad, brothers and sisters
Gathered 'round the fire, all warm and safe.
Christmas Eve has come and go,
Children having the time of their life with their new toys.
School comes back again soon.
Our vacation is over.
The snow melts away.
Spring comes up as it never left that day.
And we were dragged back to school again.
The time of our lives has end,
But the next long vacation will come in June.
Long months are far from us.
Our vacation will never leave us from this day.
- by darkicedevil7 |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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- Title: A Winter Day
- Artist: darkicedevil7
- Description: idk... i got bored... and yea... i hate it... but i wanted to for no reasons asked... it's bad for wat i know. i make poems but ppl neverunderstand that much... yea... have fun reading this very awkward poem... and plz rate fairly and comment on wat u think about it plz.
- Date: 12/04/2008
- Tags: winter
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Demonic Shinobi Maikeru - 04/16/2009
- i like this poem great job
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- darkicedevil7 - 12/22/2008
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to: scruffy019,
i'm not modest. i just dont like it THAT much... and i'm not really good when it comes to poems... i just did it for fun... now i wish i could delete it... and ppl only voted 5 times since the last count...
i still hate it... u think it makes sense, to me, not that much... just about 50/50... i give myself a 3.5/5... even if that is possible... - Report As Spam
- scruffy019 - 12/21/2008
- It is good and it makes sense 100%, stop being soo modest.
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- xII Q U A C K IIx - 12/04/2008
- It's good! what r u talkin bout it's awesome! XD
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