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Winter snow hitting my window.
I started to think about tomarrow.
I close my eyes and cuddle my bear as winters dreams begin to share.
- by superkiersten |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: Winter dreams
- Artist: superkiersten
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Description:
The image came to me in my dreams, But it was harder to put it on paper.
Sorry if its to short for your liking. - Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: snow
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Comments (7 Comments)
- nana38201 - 07/14/2009
- nice, real nice
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- kal94 - 06/13/2009
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Well it's very nice and cuteee.
But since you started in the present tense
i dont think "I start(ed)" is right.
It'd be I start.
Lol...sorry xD
Either way it's your poem.
And its very lovely :] - Report As Spam
- My_Dope_Asx - 05/10/2009
- i love it its wonderful dosent matter how short or long .a poems a poem and i happen 2 love yours
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- silven_flameblazer - 03/26/2009
- I like how she put tomarrow instead of tomorrow! ^^ XD
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- caelinefioline - 01/03/2009
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fun very fun i love it
you dont need more - Report As Spam
- Hannipp - 12/22/2008
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I think it´s good ;D
Little word´s but there is not need for more ^.^ - Report As Spam
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