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heart
snow,
falls softly upon me
you hold me,
warm in your arms
we lay in the snow,
watch it fall
and while the cool frosty flakes melt on my skin,
i melt from your kiss
the misletoe we never miss
and i watch the world,
shaken up and whiting out,
so like a snowglobe
heart
- by Lil_inuyasha_punk |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: winter love
- Artist: Lil_inuyasha_punk
- Description: a random poem about a very special winter
- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: winterlove
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Comments (7 Comments)
- blackman556 - 11/09/2009
- kinda good but you need more rhymes
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- babygirl101junior - 07/13/2009
- so romantic..
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- Cati_many - 03/28/2009
- it was nice but i think you need a rhyme...to make the whole poem rhyme.Like ab,ab,ab
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- so_whana_play - 01/13/2009
- its okei you cot dou beter but okei
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- plmkoi - 01/10/2009
- ok
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- jayburr7 - 01/08/2009
- hmmmm
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/25/2008
- Not bad. I think you would make better rhymes though. And leave out the hearts.
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