- thank you gaia for giving me this oppurtunity
- by east end king |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: carol
- Artist: east end king
- Description: peace on earth and joy to the world everyone has a favorite carol do u hear what i hear is one i most enjoy a backdrop of the peacefilled times lots of hugs and generous smiles mother earth kisses father sky newborn light reflects on stars ancient wisdom is renewed within our souls are knowing truths
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: carol
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Comments (7 Comments)
- x-C00Gi3 MUL3x- - 01/23/2010
- it sucks
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- butters_dennis - 04/12/2009
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i like it
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- Anxious Ghost - 03/24/2009
- Other than the fact that it's in the wrong spot....I like it.
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- l Sleep Walker l - 02/21/2009
- Even tough you put it in the rong place, I like it
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- Lord of the Dingbats - 12/17/2008
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Ditto Koh.
Don't worry, you can go in and fix it, I did the same thing the first time I submitted an entry. ^^ - Report As Spam
- Hells Winged Angel - 12/15/2008
- erm...hey, you were supposed to put your description in the other part, you it backwards, and it could have been ore literate, like be separated in stanza's, but other than that, pretty good
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