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Star-Crossed
Now what in the world could that be?
Left in the hands,
Of fate or destiny.
It circles and circles,
Goes round and round;
Then it hits BOOM!
It knocked them both down.
It hits it hurts,
Delivers and smirks,
Stars bring their life unpside down.
One moment their learning,
Within the next they're left;
Going,going, gone.
Trapped in a triangle,
Filled with fear.
It starts with such passion,
And ends with tears.
Romeo, Juliet,
Star-Crossed by sightt,
Left one alone, poisned, then died.
Run from that fate,
'Cause it causes so much pain.
Can't stand feeling gushy;
"no you hang up,"
"Goodbye!"
Understanding?
With reasons to flee.
I do hope that destiny wont accompany me;
With restless nights & hopless days,
I love you, in one second, the next dying in pain
{{ending #1}}
Star-Crossed
Now what in the world could that be?
Left in the hands,
Of fate or destiny.
It circles and circles,
Goes round and round;
Then it hits BOOM!
It knocked the two down.
{{ending #2}}
I do not like destiny
Or believe in fate,
But one day if I really wait.
My true love is the one i'd find;
So happy with love,
Could he be mine?
Just without adding 1+1=2
I can't wait for it,
Someday it will come true.
{{ending #3}}
It's just a chance i must take,
If i really want love.
It might cause me pain,
but still delivers love,
Sometimes they say nothing comes out of pain,
but when i hear elders talk,
their love endured.
So love can be the path I must take,
Star-Crossed with love,
Destined by fate.
- by ll W E i R D - G A S M ll |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Star-Crossed
- Artist: ll W E i R D - G A S M ll
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Description:
This is a Poem for the New Years..
and it is also about fate +&&*/ Or Destiny...
There are 3 different endings and it is up to you to choose which you would prefer to read.
I would suggest choosing a head of time..
I hope that you will like it [: - Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: starcrossed love fate hate hurt
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Zealous Assassin - 12/18/2008
- .... you spelled upside down wrong, take out the n unpside? =P awesome poem, well done, well thought out, and I noticed you tried to rhyme it, but it was a bit tricky to follow what rhymes what. you should try a Haiku. well done, awesome job. 695/5 =P
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- ll W E i R D - G A S M ll - 12/16/2008
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why fhnkyeww [:
does any one else want to comment on it?
or well.. at least post an opinion of what i can improve on? - Report As Spam
- dido5333 - 12/16/2008
- very nice. loved it a lot.
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