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i can put a smile on my friends faces,
but none on my heart,
what is this felling inside,
that is tearing me apart.
i see it in movies,
i read it in books,
i hear it in song's,
it's every were i look.
it is the season,
for this feeling to be around,
i'll never have this feeling,
so i'll die when i fall to the ground.
slowly i fade away,
please don't cry,
instead of you lke that,
i rather die.
- by Akira Hayashi |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: love
- Artist: Akira Hayashi
- Description: bored xD hand how i felt a few days ago
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sixtiens - 05/24/2009
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im srry
u pass
rock on !
tat pathetic
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- Akira Hayashi - 01/12/2009
- 0_0 i was bored and wasn't in the holiday mood at the time D8
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- kittman11 - 01/02/2009
- U FAIL BUT good
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- Renee the Rabid Squirrel - 12/24/2008
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Did you add in an extra stanza to pathetically prop this poem into the realm of the holiday season?
I'm sorry, but you fail. - Report As Spam