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Candycane
I see the red and white perfect stripe on the delicious candycane.
I taste the minty fresh peppermint in my mouth.
I could see all the children laughing and smiling while eating the spirited cane.
I hear people opening and making scrathy noises trying to eat the candycane.
I can smell that perfect minty aroma in the air,"oh, it smell so good."
Oh i can taste the sprited cane in my mouth and when i blow into the cold air i can smell and feel the minty breath and the cold.
- by donghaerts |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Candycane
- Artist: donghaerts
- Description: This is a poem about your sences colour, taste, see, hear, smell, and taste.
- Date: 12/07/2008
- Tags: candycane redandwhite colourtasteseehearsmellfeel acrosticpoem peppermint
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Comments (3 Comments)
- donghaerts - 12/21/2008
- thankies =)
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- TohoshinkiForever - 12/20/2008
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lovely and prefect just in time for winter
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- hmong goddess - 12/16/2008
- nice and for the most part flowy :3
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