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You look at me and what do you see
Someone that’s pure in heart.
Then I turn the other cheek
That’s when the madness starts.
You smile happily with glee
When you see the side of my face.
But when you see the other side you’ll say
“I shouldn’t have looked in the first place”
I’m the light inside the shadow.
I still can not get out.
If you looked inside my mind
You’d see what I’m talking about.
I lurk within an endless tunnel.
Forever searching for light.
The more I try to make peace
The more I start to fight.
Until I reach the end of the tunnel
And see rays of light on the floor
I shall remain two faced
On and on forevermore.
- by Juliano of Hellsing |
- Holiday Poem Contest
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Digital Witness - 06/08/2009
- I love how the words flow, like I've read it before. The flow is also very natural, like a nursery rhyme said a million times. It is almost as if this was effortless for you. Well done!
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- XxXpanda goes rawr45XxX - 06/06/2009
- i say wwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat to the other ones but your is the best and i have looked at all the poems
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- Sanvi - 06/06/2009
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Very good! I liked the words and how they mingled inside this piece of art!
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- candi-crazi33 - 05/28/2009
- yea i no u dnt kno me but that wuz good i think all two faced people need 2 read that wat a good artist u sld write and publish a book of poems u wild do reallli goooood
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- Mr Thelma - 05/26/2009
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Congrats, you're the first poem I've commented on in, I don't know, about two weeks.
I love this.
Because of this poem, I'm going to continue writing my book.
Don't ask why.
But, this is just beautifully written.
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- nina_nerd - 05/21/2009
- That was a really good poem ^^ Awesome dude!
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- arlan332 - 05/21/2009
- XDXDXDXDXDXDXD
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