- by SombrePresence |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 09/22/2012 |
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- Title: Patchwork
- Artist: SombrePresence
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Description:
It's a pencil sketch of a woman with long, patterned hair. Tears fall from her face and lighten as they fall closer to the ground. There is a ribbon wound around her hair. A few changes I was considering:
1. Make the ribbon thinner/thicker.
2. Redo the ends of the hairs.
3. Make the head bigger compared to the hair, or vice versa.
4. Change the pattern on the hair.
Please post suggested changes I could make, for I plan to submit an updated version.
- Date: 09/22/2012
- Tags: patchwork woman sadness hair
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Comments (1 Comments)
- SombrePresence - 09/23/2012
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It would be nice, if instead of just rating, you included advice or criticism. Thanks.
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