- by EnjeruCiel |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 08/06/2012 |
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- Title: Ryoukuya
- Artist: EnjeruCiel
- Description: First character drawing of Tetsuyoshi Ryoukuya, an OC of mine.
- Date: 08/06/2012
- Tags: ryoukuya character drawing manga
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Xylodoll - 08/16/2012
- I really like the coloring on the clothing, but the face seems a bit....too thin. As in, he doesnt really have a jaw. It makes it look a little goofy.
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- EnjeruCiel - 08/15/2012
- ahh thank you for the comment I'm glad you like the coloring. Yeah I tend to specialize in bishies so they tend to look quite feminine. I guess that's how I like 'em lawl but yeah you're probably right about the jawline. Thanks so much~
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- AngryFlyingBEars - 08/15/2012
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you did a great job on the coloring. I think the shading in the eyes is my favorite bit.
My only constructive critisism is to define the lips a little more. Right now they look a little strange to me. DOn't be afraid to darken them just a tad.
Also, if this is a strapping young man (which I am assuming because there are no lady parts) masculine him up just a teensy bit. I would maybe just give him a stronger jaw line, so no one mistakes him for a - Report As Spam
