- by LazyButler |
- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 08/02/2010 |
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- Title: BlackTekandTekWhite
- Artist: LazyButler
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Description:
So I'm practicing drawing avis so then I could do commishiez for gold so then I could get stuff I want :3
I came up with this character on TekTek:
http://www.tektek.org/avatar/38622755 *hopefully that works*
Look at the TekTek and see how I did! Commets and Ratings are well appreciated!! - Date: 08/02/2010
- Tags: blacktekandtekwhite
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Comments (5 Comments)
- LazyButler - 08/11/2010
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O-o
Thank you for all the help xD
Man...thats a lot to say, but you do make a good point...I don't have photoshop yet so I'm doing my best with shading >< - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 08/11/2010
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Edit: Sorry to be spamming you with comments. DX
I just took a look at the avatar you made on TekTek (it works, by the way) and what I see is that the breast should be larger enough to be seen in the position I recommended and also in the position you drew. - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 08/11/2010
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It's this color pencil without color which is used to blend colors. This piece could use a good blending because not only does it blend colors, but it also brings out the color (and it will cover in most white spots). So overall, anatomy is not much of an issue but could use a reference to check over. Make sure that all FIVE fingers are drawn, and color the picture better (and also get that colorless blender to make it even better). 4/5 - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 08/11/2010
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and add on to the color for shading. The skin is a little too yellow, maybe add some orange and maybe a little red (lightly). I might also recommend just a dash of brown for the darkest shade. You should also try and color the hair a little better it looks too flat (make the shadings in the hair darker, add some contrast). I would also suggest this to you; go to whatever art store you go to and buy a colorless blender. - Report As Spam
- Phantom-of_Winter - 08/11/2010
- This is very nice. However, there are a couple of things that bother me. The first thing was how the back was drawn. I might be wrong about this, but I think the back should be more curved. I would also say that her breast should be visible (unless the character her is flat chested). Secondly the hand that is showing in the front... looks like she has four fingers! D: Please add the pinky finger! Thirdly, the coloring. Did you just color in a straight line? If so, try coloring in small circles a
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