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  • Title: broken mask
  • Artist: sohi_moon
  • Description: i just felt like making a mask one day... took maybe 4 hours....please tell me what i could do to improve, not just what to do but also how to do it.

    check out my other work in both the art and writing arenas! also im looking for people who want me to draw their avi...free avi art for now. trying to improve.
  • Date: 02/07/2010
  • Tags: broken mask
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • mortimort - 06/19/2010
  • Criticism! The face seems a bit squished vertically. Which I think is part of the reason why the nose seems so small. The tiny cracks look awesome, but the one big crack (heheh) seems too unrealistic. Dunno why. Maybe its too straight? Last thing. I like the blood on the cheek but the rest look like leeches or something. The pattern (or lack of) kinda confuses me. sweatdrop
    I do like it though. 3nodding Its kinda creepy...=)
  • sohi_moon - 02/16/2010
  • thank yall so much. this is one of my favorites so far. be sure to check out my other work 'mmkay? razz
  • iMeowTao - 02/11/2010
  • I completely agree with Tavis Harts.
    The nose could use lengthening, but other than that, this is fantastic! X3
    5/5 all the way! <3
  • pheeboid - 02/07/2010
  • really good but the nose looks a bit flat if you shaded around it it would be better still 5/5 though smile
  • sohi_moon - 02/07/2010
  • im all alone...nobody wants to comment on my art......... *sniffle* i really like this picture and i hope you guys do too! check out my other work in both the art and writing arenas! also im looking for people who want me to draw their avi...free avi art for now. trying to improve.
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