- Title: Yanni - Your Wish
- Artist: Xaiphin
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Description:
Yanni (c) Me
Before you say it: No it is not hentai or anything like that.
I'm currently taking commissions, for full colour £25, for colour dolls £15, linearts £10.
DeviantArt Link: http://chibixai.deviantart.com/art/Yanni-Your-Wish-137341967 - Date: 09/21/2009
- Tags: anime manga girl fantasy
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Veste - 09/21/2009
- @Xaiphin: You're quite welcome! B]
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- Xaiphin - 09/21/2009
- @Veste - Thank you very much biggrin you're my favourite sort of critic, you put both pro and con and I can actually learn from it too biggrin thank you!! *bow*
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- Veste - 09/21/2009
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Last bit of critique is her right thigh (her right, your left). It tucks in too sharply, and is too small for the rest of the leg. Also, from the position, you should be able to see at least a wittle of her right foot.
However! I do like your shading, it's an interesting pattern to do it in. Her outstretched leg turned out really well, but the shading from her skirt is a little off. It's too much shadow thrown onto that oustretched leg. Despite a few mishaps, your anatomy is fairly strong!
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- Veste - 09/21/2009
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Critique time! :"D
Alright, a good way to make the face look a little less crooked would have been to tilt the chin more towards one shoulder, as such, because the face is completely forward, it looks off-center.
The problem with the arms is that they don't have any definition. Even with the sleeves, they curve wrong. They're too thin, and also the upper arm should be thicker then the forearm. The forearm also curls out too far, giving her little noodle arms.
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- TomomiChan1 - 09/21/2009
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i thinks the arms aren't wrong D:
for me it'S to sexy // <_< // - Report As Spam
- Xaiphin - 09/21/2009
- @Yevke - thank you for saying why. The face is suposed to be tilted, though I think I might have drawn the shoulders wrong for it to show properly. And the arms, people keep mentioning them, but I personally can't find anything wrong with them :S
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