- Title: Allatez's Art
- Artist: Allatez
- Description: i want to open and art shop but i need some advice and tips. How much would you pay for something like this and what can i do to fix it. I need a lot of tips on how to draw hands if anyone has any.
- Date: 06/24/2009
- Tags: allateza
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Allatez - 06/28/2009
- thanks that is a lot more helpful ^^ oh in the ref pic i forgot to add the cuttlephones which add makeup or w/e onto the face thats why the lines on the bottom are thick too.
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- Arkelle - 06/28/2009
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I would also recommend that you make the black lines under the eyes alot thinner, or do not add then at all. It gives her the impression that she is sleepy. If you look closely at the original avatar, you can tell the lines under the eyes are alot smaller than the lines on top of the eyes.Remember the eyelash line is allways thicker on the top.
Regardless, I would pay a good 3k-5k for one. I hope that helps! ^^ - Report As Spam
- Arkelle - 06/28/2009
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hmmmm, I think she means shadows on the hair, under the neck, and slightly in between the legs.
Also I've noticed that gaia avatars have no figure, or curves. I would suggest making the legs a little longer and the hips slightly wider. Don't try to make the art such a direct translation of the avatar. Do something original to it with the pose or face(a smile for example), people who purchase avi art seem to like that creative spin. And one more thing, .... - Report As Spam
- Allatez - 06/27/2009
- your comment didnt help any as you can see there are shadows on it. if you are going to tell me about something already there tell me where else i can add it to make it more 3 dimensional dont just say it has no depth then expect me to know what to do to fix it.
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- bunny-rush - 06/26/2009
- you need to add depth to it. light and shadows. right now it looks one dementional.. which isnt great.
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- 3-BU_bb_LEs-3 - 06/24/2009
- it luks great the thing is that with that position u need to make the eyes a little more shy. if my advice doesnt work then it luks great. btw id pay about 5k kk
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