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  • Title: Tinker-El
  • Artist: Kannon Masamune
  • Description: Avatar art done for Tinker-El. This represents a couple milestones for me. This is the first art submission I've made under the new arena format. This is also the first real bit of art I've done in 2-3 years. Critiques are welcomed and encouraged.
  • Date: 04/16/2009
  • Tags: tinkerel
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Sinna Roll - 12/31/2012
  • Not everyone is that good good at drawing; you'll never believe how long it took me to get the proportions right WITH guide lines. ^^; I'm still not the best at it...
  • Sam the Morningstar - 04/18/2009
  • I wasnt sure if it's a perspective issue or a proportion issue, but everything is too short on her. Remeber that the average human iare 7-8 "heads" tall. Women are usually lower on that but still. Te torso should at least be 2.5 "heads"
  • Danika Miles - 04/16/2009
  • I agree on the hands being small however I believe some women have that muscular stomach and i like it and some women don't have big hips. As for the boobs they are fine too many people make women with huge a** boobs. Proportions are the main area I would look into. I like everything else. Good job Kantaloupe.
  • Kira_Kenta - 04/16/2009
  • It looks good, the colors and shading with highlights. Her body does look more masculine to me then it should be. And the arm/hand looks just odd to me. Other then those lil tid bits, do some more femine curves, bigger boobs, and you'll be good.
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