- Title: Newbie Avatar :3
- Artist: Otosaki
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Description:
So here is a drawing I made of my newbie avatar. I didn't colour (I'm Canadian! I spell it this way! >;l) it because it isn't that great so I decided just to enter the drawing. Now, I'll tell you right now, I love criticism. The shoulders are too high and the right eye is messed up blahblah, listen I wanna hear it all. I also like compliments... but yahh know!
Soo (c)me (otosaki) 2009, not that anyone would claim this crappy piece of "artwork".
- Date: 01/26/2009
- Tags: newbie avatar
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Comments (5 Comments)
- barehippiefeet11 - 07/19/2009
- is this a girl or a boy? if it's a guy...he has boobs.. might wanna change that if he is.
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- SiderAnne - 01/27/2009
- It reminds me of some people I used to hang out with. I mean, you're obviously not drawing a real person (otherwise I'd have some criticism) but it's representational. Some peoples' arms do seem to dangle around their knees. And I like how it could be a guy or a girl, some people skew toward the other gender.
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- Despoilah - 01/27/2009
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Nice ideas, but the proportions are way out of order.
Interresting pose but take note for the harsh pencil lines, it creates an unnecesary chaotic image.
Try practicing perspective drawing.
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- Riberovich - 01/26/2009
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Actually, I guess the eyes and shoulders are pretty ok. biggrin
The arm looks a lil too long, tho. It seems she can touch her knee while standing... But the rest is very good. biggrin 4/5 - Report As Spam
