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- Painting And Drawing
- | Submitted on 01/03/2009 |
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- Title: Anime Luv
- Artist: 3243254365476577745k
- Description: I was bored....
- Date: 01/03/2009
- Tags: anime
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Comments (3 Comments)
- brynka - 01/05/2009
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My comment got cut so heres the rest of it.
Try having the characters holding each other or some sort of physical contact besides the kiss.
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- brynka - 01/05/2009
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That Kanji is a bit diffrent, you forgot a few lines in it. I'm not sure you can see it well when it so small but it looks like this 愛 in the middle part you missed on line and you used another to connect it to the bottom part wich you don't do.
But when it comes to the art the characters look absoloutly emotionless, if your going for modern art it's cool but you tagged it as anime, which is a very emtional type of art so I feel like this picture is very cold. Try having the characters - Report As Spam
- TaeKyuNa - 01/05/2009
- UGLY i know i am mean
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