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  • Princess Tarta - 11/29/2008
  • (continued) I was looking though your drawing again, the straps do not look too realistic, I would say to reference to an actual one to give it more feel, the coloring seem so one dimension so try to add more texture, male necks are thicker than females so make it thicker, and don't outline the shadows underneath the lip and the nose because it gives it a plain feeling.
  • Princess Tarta - 11/29/2008
  • the anatomy is semi-okay, but the eyes are too far apart.
    there is also an eyebrow missing.
    the eyes look cross-eyed.
    I suggest you take tutorials from Deviantart to improve, but I'd give it a 3/5 for effort.
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