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  • Title: Kiss
  • Artist: Darling-Dani
  • Description: Second Time using pastels :-/ Ummm...Whut can i say...I tried :) If you have any CONSTRUCTIVE critisism its greatly appreciated :) Tell me whut you think!
    I used: Pastels, Pencil and charcol...
  • Date: 03/23/2009
  • Tags: kiss
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • BattleStarPicketFence - 06/27/2009
  • Your problem is anatomy. The guy's neck is too far forward when connecting the head and isn't straight enough when shooting out from the torso. His forehead and jaw don't match; the jaws on both are too big.
    All that aside, I think you have talent, but your skills need to be refined. Try studying anatomy from photography. You have great potential!
  • Lunacy Fr1nge - 04/04/2009
  • aww you caught the moment! ^-^
    I really like the drawing but do keep in mind that hunman heads are NOT square! lol good job though
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