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  • Title: Dissu Page Four
  • Artist: Keiseki-san
  • Description: Dissonant Underground's Page four! Heads up! This is done in traditional manga format, so read right to left please! Lineart is penciled and inked by hand. Tones are done digitally!

    If you have any critiques or suggestions to help with improving my artworks, feel free to comment! Thank you so much! I usually don't get which areas needed tweaking, since I just average a 3.5.
  • Date: 09/30/2011
  • Tags: dissu page four
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Comments (3 Comments)
  • Rupa_La_Pirate - 01/24/2012
  • Wow, honestly I think this is really good. The only thing is, pay attention to where your focal point is. In the last panel I'm drawn more to the grey building than the words. If you made a highlight around the words then they would pop out more. And I love the texture on the dark suit. ^__^ <3
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