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  • Arenas
  • HandsofFate pg:12
Comments (4 Comments)
  • Mezri - 05/19/2010
  • Looks good, you might need to work on some of the grammar and spelling. IE: in the second pannel it should be we're not were. And, the second last pannel it says "homr" instead of "home"

    Your art is pretty good but your paint skills need a little work. You could straighten up the lines and, make the text boxes thinner I think it would make the finished product look heaps better. Very nice though. C: 4/5
  • Christica - 05/17/2010
  • The art looks good, save for the second panel. Her head should be a little wider. Just a little ^-^;; I bet, if you had brought the hair on the top-back of her head out just a lil farther it would look good :'3;;
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