- Title: PAGE03 DARK SHINING BLADE EP01
- Artist: regna91
- Description: NEXT IS DSB0104
- Date: 07/16/2009
- Tags: dsb0103
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kouchakan - 01/25/2010
- Really nice, but maybe you should trying making the lines of the speech bubbles grey, to better match the rest of the comic.
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- iiEccentricus - 08/08/2009
- Very good.... but your grammar killed it.
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- Khalaissa - 07/26/2009
- *and not ans, my bad ^^;
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- Khalaissa - 07/26/2009
- to mitsuki: I unstand your frustration I to am big on grammar ans such but ever stop to think he was putting emphasis on how this character talked? Lots of writer's do that, as well as I. anyways love the art 5/5
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- mitsuki95351 - 07/24/2009
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"are you crazy?
so... you really from other world"
corrections;
so... (you're/ you ARE) really from another world?
"thats's mean, you got spells or divine powers right?"
corrections:
that means you know spells or have divine powers, right?
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- Reyzak - 07/22/2009
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@@ my frendz!!
its "for" or "from"?
and robert..what do you mean the chars not to good? - Report As Spam
