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  • Captain Critique - 11/20/2010
  • Overall, wonderful job! I wish I had the Mangamaker Program! Doing everything by hand takes forever! >x>

    Wow...did I seriously just take up three comments? Epic win.

    5/5 for this page!
  • Captain Critique - 11/20/2010
  • se the pictures as much as the words to tell a story in comics!

    Third panel: Her body ish disapearing!!! NUUUUU!!! Wait...you can still see the boobs, thus everything is okay.

    Whole page: I'm thinking they're surrounded by fog or something? Either that, or you're too lazy to draw the full bodies. xDDDD Also, your grammar sucks! D: Fix it! It isn't that hard! Just capitalize your goddamn sentences!!!!

  • Captain Critique - 11/20/2010
  • ME TOO!!!! xDDD

    Okay, first panel. It's epic. But because you have challenged me, I must now find a flaw! AHA! The thumb is unnatural, and the ring finger has an extra wrinkle that makes it look odd. Also, the wavy lines overlap the character, while I personally think they should be behind him, and you made them in front of him to cover up a mistake! >:3

    Second panel: You shouldn't have to write *puts away.* You should be able to make this very obvious with the artwork alone! You need to u
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