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  • I love you ! Wah ???
  • Title: I love you ! Wah ???
  • Artist: RPD_Leon S Kennedy XD
  • Description: This is one of my manga comics. This had happend to me aswell.Wen i fell in love. She was suprised buT now we dont talk anymore :( Or see Each other
  • Date: 06/14/2009
  • Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • tiggymewmew - 12/31/2009
  • Good start but do work on eyes and mouths as well as folds on clothes. From the looks of it that shirt is huge and making some awkward folds, try looking at people wearing large shirts or pictures of that. And for backgrounds always use a ruler, any accidental curved lines give the panel a distorted feel as something is wrong or about to happen. Keep working on it and you'll get really good. 3nodding
  • tiggymewmew - 12/31/2009
  • To Sorena Sagara... rolleyes Whatever manga can be drawn by anyone... I mean would you say that pizza isn't pizza if it isn't made by an Italian. And if you're going to bother to comment do give helpful criticism but without the rude bit. Let's see you put some stuff up before you start bashing on other people's work.
  • Sorena Sagara - 10/15/2009
  • ...Da ******** with the faces? The guy on the left looks like a tranny..
    Are those supposed to be lips? o.e
    Seriously, work on your drawing skills and story line if you're going to write a manga. And isn't that like.. An asian's job? :T
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