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  • Dream Captive p.2
Comments (6 Comments)
  • neko-axe - 05/06/2014
  • The art looks pretty good but it's a really cramped. Keep in mind that comic pages, even simple ones, tend to stick around 5-7 panels per page to accommodate speech bubbles and it looks like you have ~14. And don't forget backgrounds; context means everything in storytelling.
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