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  • Title: #2
  • Artist: The Satoshi
  • Description: This is page #2 of the online yuri comic Scarecrow Lullaby if you want to see the comic in it's full version click the link below
    http://www.drunkduck.com/ScareCrow_Lullaby/

    THIS IS MY COMIC I MADE IT WITH MY OWN HANDS!!!
    Content ©2008, 2009, 2010 Satoshi.
  • Date: 05/02/2009
  • Tags: scarecrow lullaby comic webcomic yuri
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • Catalytic Productions - 09/13/2012
  • I can't really tell what's going on. I have a feeling that you rely excessively on closeups in order to avoid tackling full anatomy. (And because manga does that a lot). But it doesn't help the reader get a good picture of what the characters are doing. You've got good potential, just keep at it and don't be afraid to take risks. It's the only way to improve :3
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