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  • THA (Another)
  • Title: THA (Another)
  • Artist: Anin Meister
  • Description: This one I'm making that would make some more sense then the last THA I made well here's what he's saying
    You never stop do you... and you swore to me you'd never do it again. I tried protecting you and yet you did this! Why did you hide it all away in your heart and bury it with lies... But I'm also at fault. Why am I even talking to you? You're not even her at all. Your eyes are so empty like mirrors that reflect my image... *sighing* pff... same aura
  • Date: 02/18/2009
  • Tags: comic
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • KateMonster x3 - 06/28/2009
  • My only critique is put less emphasis on the background. It's good you made the effort to have it in there, but it makes your panels extremly crowded and displeasing to the eye. Also, don't be afraid to make girls eyes dramatic, like in panel 9 (?) And try to keep the eyes at a same level each time. Sometimes they are perfect, but other you have them way over near the ear area. I envy your shading though (:
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