sea of glass

• Artist: kiba_akira
• Description: this poem is from my heart
• Date: 08/26/2009
• Tags: glass sonet

like the a sea of glass sparkling,eyes
bright and cheerful like the sun is a smile
sweet as a lovely rose is she
sunset beauty from head to toes
like birds chirping on a nice spring day is her voice
graceful and majestic like a doe prancing the evergreen forest
every minute, second with her is unimmaginable
fairest one

Comments

[ninja_gir123]

about time guys start being romantic again! 5/5

[Paper Crane Kiko]

i think its sweet. its very lovely 4/5

[1X LA DE DA X1]

i agree w/ kalan 69train, things will get pretty ugly if you just show it to her without tellin'....but a 4/5 smile

[Kalan TraiN]

thats kind of overdoing it. maybe you should let her know you like her and all before you start creeping her out with that.

[SpiritWildLife]

I really like it a lot because it is very beautiful and look someone that u love her very much. 5/5

[NathyMm]

awww....thiz iz soo sweet..i feel lik crying now...thiz 'someone' u care about iz very lucky.. nd...yea