Love

• Artist: MiniTeaCakes
• Description: This is a poem I wrote one day when I was bored... First poem I've ever written outside of school... I have almost no free time that I don't spend on Gaia...
  
  Anyways, this poem is about how love is not all it's cracked up to be. It can be the worst. My reason for writing this is not something I would like to share because it is kinda personal...
  
  And finally,
  Enjoy!
• Date: 05/14/2009
• Tags: love sadness

So tiny,
So small.
Four little letters.
One short word.
Means so much.

So contrasting.
Contridicting,
Controlling actions,
Disrupting judgement.

Break your gaze to wipe a tear,
Heart is crushed,
A vanishing smile;
Start falling apart.

Better without?
Give it all up?
Be careful;
It's like a flame

So amazing.
Dreams destroyed,
Fears confirmed,
All over

Comments

[val6]

i like it 5 stars

[Ichor of Ink]

Good job, Gatesy!

[Lynnea_cat]

Aww, i like it ;3

[Caesura Caelum]

i think this is a great poem! i can relate to how you demenstrate of how you feel about love, you may enjoy reading a few of mine, specificaly the ones named, yeah its true, better left alone, and lost chance, you don't have to if you don't want to, but anyways 5/5 on your poem, nicely done :3

[pockymonster96]

I think it's a good poem, Gates!~ ^_^

[Leonlam12]

comment XD

[MiniTeaCakes]

Please comment! I want to know what I can improve on next time!