Pollution

• Artist: TOXiCKiiSS x
• Description: This a poem I wrote for class I don't think it's that good.Any suggestion would be nice I don't care mean or not give me your opinion please.
• Date: 03/15/2009
• Tags: pollution

Pollution is caused by a plastic bag
or,what you cut off your shirt,a tag
they go into landfills
so don't flush your pills
or forever pay
It's either the future or today

Comments

[Bellatrix Scarlet]

It's short and sweet, but I think some elaboration would be excellent! You might throw in some lines about other things that pollute the earth - be it more landfill objects, car fumes, the ocean problems, even global warming. The wonderful thing about poetry is that it's never wrong. smile