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Feeling a little silly,
Because I like him maybe not,
And I dream of walks on the beach,
My heart is caught.
Maybe one day,
We can be together,
Just him and I,
Through even the stormiest of weather.
And maybe one day,
I won't be the only one to smile,
When our eyes meet,
And this heartache now will all be worthwhile.
- by angeldiane |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/12/2009 |
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- Title: Maybe One Day
- Artist: angeldiane
- Description: Something random I wrote. Please comment. :)
- Date: 03/12/2009
- Tags: maybe
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Comments (3 Comments)
- inking the world - 12/21/2009
- I like it. it makes you smile
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- Scarlett Succubus - 03/16/2009
- Sweet, it has a nice scheme and the feminine rhymes are working for the most part. Some of the ideas behind the poem are a little clique so the metaphors are dead. Make us look at love in a new light.
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- Hikaru1214 - 03/13/2009
- good...-_-
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