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Every time I see him,
He has a cigerette,
Smoking like a train,
About to fall of the tracks,
I tell him to stop,
But he says he can't,
I ask why not,
He says it's sweet,
He says every time he smokes,
He forgets all his troubles-and dreams-,
I see him on the streets,
Begging for money,
This obsession has made him mad,
Turned him crazy,
For now he can't live without it,
But he'll soon learn that he can't live with it, either
- by 6Mr-Bright-Side9 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/17/2009 |
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- Title: sweet addiction
- Artist: 6Mr-Bright-Side9
- Description: this is a poem for my drug-addict friend.
- Date: 01/17/2009
- Tags: sweet addiction
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Dr Scheisskopf - 06/22/2009
- loverly peom! 5/5. biggrin
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- Kari--Godess_Of_Lightning - 05/11/2009
- i like this poem..eve though its sad about your friend 5/5
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- RockstarJo - 01/19/2009
- I wouldn't exactly say "Nice" poem. I mean its great but you know... My life has been really affected by someone I know who is an addict. Its hard to cope; to say the least. And its like nothing you do can make them see eye to eye with you. (Well, Normal eye to red bloodshot eye thats seeing pretty rainbows.) Anyway off my rambling, I love this; Hope you can help your friend, and I hope to see more of your work smile
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- HarajukuGirl92 - 01/18/2009
- Very good!Hope your friend gets help.
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- Etherlights - 01/18/2009
- Lol that was something. Tell your friend to take a chill pill. 5/5
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- Code Aria - 01/17/2009
- <D I hope ur friend realizes that it's bad for him too. It's very thoughtful of u to worry about him~ ^___^ And it's a very nice poem~
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