Why not me...

• Artist: Atikmatix
• Description: This is my second poem, the other one I already posted, and people liked it so I guess this one should be just as good,
• Date: 01/11/2009
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I feel complete whenever you are near
You're always there whenever I shed a tear
Even if you could choose another
I just couldnt be with any other

Many times, you had said you loved me
I still don't know why we could never be
Never not once did you ever tell me why
I dont know how many times I'd cry

Know now that I will always love you
Everything I've ever said is true
Carry that knowledge as I say good-bye
Because right now, I just want to die...

Comments

[Atikmatix]

lol thanks for the good feedback, i dont usually do poetry but lately i feel like it, plus im going thru some stuff and taht kind of helped

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

oh that is so beautiful... lovely work crying

[kiwijian_01]

holy dang..dat is cute

[Sunlight_Maiden456]

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!