No Name

• Artist: September feild
• Description: Just came to me...
  more like a really weird story than a poem(which was what I first wanted it to be...)
• Date: 11/28/2008
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On a cold Winter's night,
a child lies still in the still light
a dream awoke him,his lips moving...murmuring
a dream so frightening and yet so alluring
'Do not bother me...'he said
the breeze strengthened as he said
''Go away...'
the wind wispered in his ear
'Master,master,can you not hear?'
'I hear it my friend...'
the child stood up and said one chilling word
'Come...'
as if from thin air, a spirit appears
so dim and yet so bright,in the cold Winters night
'What brings this here?'
the spirit said
'To bring thou back to where thy belong.'
'Then go back to your world,there is still work for me to be done...'
a sudden gust of wind so strong
the light flickered and the spirit disappeared
the child walked away,closer to his destination,
also disappearing in the dim flickering lights.....

Comments

[September feild]

Thanx November! smile smile

[November blues]

Great poem sis' hope you keep up the good work (^_^)

[Xagetta Blackthorn]

Hi, just wanted to give my oppinion. Actually, all in all its pretty good. True it does have a sense of weirdness to it, but thats what makes it interesting. Then again, I've been known to be weird my self. 4/5 for creativity.

[September feild]

So sorry that it's a bad poem...but please,don't be to harsh on the comments... sad